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INTERNET POSTING

About me: I'm Elideth. I am from Mexico. I am a student of biotechnology at Tecnologico de Monterrey University. I like my school but I don't know many people. My English class is in the morning. I am nineteen. I love traveling, but I don't know many places.

Interests/Hobbies: I like alternative rock music, and my favourite band is Muse. I'm very creative. I do crafts or write alternative stories. I like drawing but I don't drw well. I love reading novels and watching TV series.

Request: Please email me. I want to meet people from USA and Canada. I want to have friends who help me with my English.

A SPECIAL PERSON: Mauricio Ortiz Martinez

Mauricio Ortiz Martinez was born in Mexico City in 1998. He was the first of two children. His father and his mother separated when he was six. His dad was a builder and his mother have a housewife.

When Mauricio was at school. He did not friends because he was a very quiet and sad person. In middle school, he was overcoming all the chaos of his life and had his first friends. They are Chris, Toño and Brayan. So, they decided to work. They worked in workshops and personal services.

Mauricio met his girlfriend Patricia Morales in 2010, and they broke in 2016. When they were together they did a study in 2011. His friends worked in ZL or Zonido Legendario in spanish. It's logo was of three inverted triangles but all that ended in 2016 for external problems of each member. It was a very hard blow for Mauricio

Mauricio is a hero for me. He helps the people he loves and but he helps anyone who needs it. He a good person! I admire him because there are not many people like him.